A first-take on the first five pages (going on the suggestion of having the “entire” family visible at the start).

“I’m glad we talked” Daughter
“I’m glad we all talked” Dad
“Everyone knows my wishes” Dad
The P.O.D. is set…” Dad
“… and the T.O.D. is ready.”


At first, I was going to have the Dad in the “hospital”… but, after drawing it, not so sure…


  1. megbaciu

    I do like the idea of the hospital, because of the object adds a change in emotion for me. Otherwise I feel like the movements of the birds are all kind of similar, especially the group shots. On the other hand, having the bed as the environment “clue” might be too straight forward. It’s nice you can really feel their emotions through the drawings.

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